The First Seven Chapters Of ZO My Story

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CHAPTER 1 New flesh

*crrrz* the radio crakles "hello" *static* "is anyone there?" *crrrz* "we are trapped in a house we have barracaded all doors" *crrrz* "need evac.." *crrz* "help" *here's pounding on the door over the radio* "there..." *loses connetion* 
(*_*)--"sir there are non infected (Called free men) in a house three kliks away what should we do?"
[*_*]--"rally the troops and rev up the hummers" *crrz* "were going in!!"
(*_*)--"SIR WE HAVE INBOUND!" *crrz* "SHALL WE OPEN FIRE?"
[*_*]-"Use the 50.cals on the hummers and mow them down"
(Sounds of screaming zombies in the distance then suddenly silence)
They find the door smashed in and a infected feasting on a corpe.
(*_*)-"FIRE!" (more screams) "sir we found one survivor in the closet he claims the scratch on his arm is from when crack in the wood slit his arm"
The doctors check his arm out and find nothing.
 
They drive off into the distance but miss the figure off a human lurking off in the shadows!


CHAPTER 2. The road to death    

The troops are driving back to base when somthing crakles up on the radio *crrz* "Hello commander *cough* I saw that you saved the free men from my *crrz* *crrz* (lose's connetion)
[*_*]--"Damm what happend?".  (*_*)--"we lost all connetion we don't know why!" "But who was that guy" 
{*_*}--"SIR INBOUND ZOMBIES".   [*_*]--"What? Were nowere near the outbreak zone how did they get out here?"
{*_*}--"Wait *Screams are coming from the area* Are they human?" Suddenly the hummer stops *clunk* and the people turn around.
{*_*}--"sir there infected FIRE"
(*_*)--"there everywhere Argg what the......   {*_*}--"CRAP he's dead we have to move now! Commander? COMMANDER!"
*screams from the hummer the trooper walks over to it and finds the saved human eating away on his body* 
(*_*)--"CRAP WHAT THE HELL" *Gunfire* 
           Ten hours later the trooper is standing over his comrades bodys (*_*)--"dear god may these men rest in peace and let no infected harm them" *Picks up a transmission over the radio* "Muhaha you have failed..*crrz* no hope left for you..*crrz* new York *crrz You will find a divice...*crrz* Help to defeat them*crrz* *static* (lose's connection) {*_*}--"Must keep on going forget about comrades"


CHAPTER 3 New York 

{~_~}--"ZzzzzZzz.... *BANG* Woah What the... How long have I been asleep? Better see what that bang was"
|*_*|--"Cmon lads GIVE IT TO EM" {*_*}--"Errrm Hello? Is anyone there?" 
|^_^|--"SIR WE HAVE A NEW HUMAN FIGHTING WITH US"
{*_*}--"Ermmmm I was from the manhatten Zombie defence group but we went to save Some humans and we lost all of my comrades I'm the only one left.How many are you?"
|*_*|--"We are the New York defence there are quite a lot of us.Over 40 fighting and about 20 medics"
{*_*}--"Have you heard anything about a relic which will defeat the zombies with?" |*_*|-"Yes we have send four teams but they have never come back"
{*_*}-"I will lead a team in. I will need your most elite men and wepons".      Two hours later >*_*<--"Sir were ready to go shall we open the doors to the main city?" 


CHAPTER 4 The center of the dead

*creak* The door slowly opens.>*_*<--"Sir where are all the zombies?"(*_*)--"I don't know but anyway we will fan out three meter spread don't let anything get past us!" 
Ten mins later,>*_*<--"Sir Is that a little Girl just standing there?"(The commander stares at the girl like he he's possesed) >*_*<--"SIR SNAP OUT OF IT! FIRE" *gunfire and the gentle screams of the girl dieing* (Suddenly the radio crakles and the same old voice comes on the line) "You have failed,You have just killed your only hope to get to relic *crrz* now you will perish under the force of my creations the Zombies Now DIE!" (Screams from everywhere a horde of zombies swarms for out of the houses) (*_*)--"WE NEED BACKUP SEND MORE......." *crrrz* *crrzzzzz* (connection lost) [•]--"MUhahahaha MUhahahaha"


CHAPTER 5 HOPE LOST

|*_*|--"UNITS COME IN *crrrz* UNITS! Troops I'm afraid we have lost bravo team and we have no hope in winning this war agains them!"
Random soldier speaks up-"What sir you said they will find it!" |*_*|--"Im sorry men now gear up for the third wave"
"INBOUND WAIT.... It'S BRAVO TEAM OPEN THE GATES!"
(*_*)--"We need to get out of here NOW! Run there are more zombies than ever" (In the background you hear somone shouting "GET OFF ME ARRG")(*_*)-"damm that's the frontal guard dieing WE NEED TO MOVE!"
Captain"All men we are moving out get ammo and run"
(Radio transmission from the zombie guy)*crrrz*" If you leave you will have no chance of winning this war There is no hope for you now you alone know who I am I was one of your colleges that you left at the outbreak 12yrs ago! Then I enslaved the zombies and now they work for me!"


CHAPTER 6 Out of the frying pan

Suddenly The zombies stop,Silence,No movement. [*_*]--"Sir whats happening" {*_*}--"I don't know stay frosty" Suddenly the Zombies speak and say *.*-( Help us Help....) [*_*]-"Should I Engage Them"
{*_*}-"No Do not Engage,This May Be A Trap" 
Suddenly They Jerk Back Into Life Again And Start Flailing There Arms Around Wildly Like There Trying To Hit SomeThing But What? [*_*]-"Sir,We Should Get Out Of Here" {*_*}-"No First We Need To Know What They Are Doing" [*_*]-"SIR GETDOWN" As A Zombie Swipes At Sir He Manages To Save His Life.
{*_*}-"Thanks Jackson,Now Let's Get Out Of Here"
[*_*]-"Roger,Wait What's That On Your Back?!"
{*_*}-"What's Wha.......ARG.....What's Happening To Me..URF...Get..O...ut Of Here"
Jackson Runs For His Life As He Hears Blood Curdling Screams Coming From His Old Leader As He Turns Into Something Else.
Jackson Manages To Get To The Surviors Chopper Just As It Takes Off
|*_*|-"JUMP" Jackson Jumps And Just Makes It.
He Has Survived Another Day In This Cold Barron WasteLand But Is This His Last Lifeline,What Happend To Sir? Is He Alive?


Chapter 7 Ain't No Business Like "Snow" Business

Jackson Was Still In The Chopper When Suddenly An Alarm Sounded [*_*]-"What's That!?" Not Even A Second After He Said That Another Alarm Sounded! The Leader Of The Survivors Speaks Up "All Units Were Going In For An Emergency Landing,All This Snow And Sleet Is Messing Up The Rotor And The Stability!" Then The One Of The Blades Snaps Of The Rotor And Flys Into A Nearby Cliff,Now Begins A Fast Decent! "GET OUT,JUMP" Shouts The Pilot "I'LL SLOW HER DOWN"
Jackson And The Men Jump.....Then A Massive Explosion Follows As The Chopper Bites The Dust!
[*_*]-"Ugh Ah That Hurt.Is Anyone Alive?!"
A Group Of Soldiers Speak Up "Jackson! We Though You Were Dead."
[*_*]-"Cant Put A Good Man Down Eh!,Now Where's Sir?"
Sadly The Men Give No Reply For A Moment But Then A Piercing Screech Breaks The Silence.
Then With An Almighty Thud,A Massive Muscular Figure Jumps Down From The Cliff And Lands On Two Of The Soldiers!
Jackson Struggles To His Feet,Grabs His Rifle And The Last Soldier And They Sprint Away Only To Find A Dead End...They See They Have No Hope And Start To Fire Away....          




CH8 IS OUT ON CRISTMAS!!

  

[Amy]

Not bad. I don't want to be a critic, but isn't it a bit short for chapters? It's pretty good btw.. Well, I got to go map make now, so ttyl

-Amy

[[PYRO] Critikal]

I Do These On Notes So They Gotta Be Short

[Mithoz]

If you want me to be critical of your work just tell me

But a good and interesting story, slighty hard to follow cos your storyline is jumping everywhere.

And grammar might need fixing. Eg. 2nd chpter it's "their" instead of there.

But that's me been picky

[[PYRO] Critikal]

The Intro Of The Last Troops Jackson And Weaver Takes The Storyline Lower And Focuses In Pure Action As It Hopefully Starts To Show In CH8
and CH9

[ducati848]

Cant wait ...

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FAA U Get The Sneak Peek Of CH9 When I've Finished It =D

[DaJollyRoger]

Your sig says three spots for previews, make that two.

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Ducati Gets A Free Preview Do U Want One?

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Post Here If u want Free Updates And Preview Letter Though Your PM's On This Forum THREE SPOTS LEFT First Three Get It

[DaJollyRoger]

Here

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TWO SPOTS LEFT Djr I Will Start Them After Cristmas

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Here's CH8


Chapter 8 Blood Red

Jackson And The Last Soldier Called Weaver Were Firing Away At The Heavy Zombie When Jackson Shouts Out "Weaver,Look A Rope! Get Up I'll Hold Him Off For The Time Being!" Weaver Looks Up And Starts To Climb Up The Rope As He Gets To The Top He Shouts "Jackson,Get Up 'ere Quick"
Jackson Starts Climbing As A Rock Thrown By The Heavy Narrowly Misses Him.He Gets Up Just As The Heavy Pulls The Rope Down. [*_*]-"Dam That Was Close,Now What's This" Jackson Points To A Deep Dark Hole And Starts Walking In To It,Weaver Close Behind.......They Switch On There Flashlight's Only To Reveal A Blood Redness Staining The Walls Of The Cave As They Press On They Find The Path Splits Into Two [*_*]-"We Can't Split Up It's Too Dangerous We'll Take The Right Path" They Walk Carefully Down The Path..... 

[lisida19]

Fucking law deletimg my posts I was the first!!!

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ONE SPOT LEFT Lisida And Djr Have Got The First To

[hiseas21]

I want it plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!

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AGOTO GOT LAST ONE THEY START AFTER Christmas! Have Fun With My Storys

[hiseas21]

Yes!!!!!! btw, nice preview hehe lolz

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No Worrys It Out Today

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Chapter 9 Where Are We?

As There Making There Way Down The Path,They See A Group Of Figures In The Distance,Jackson Shouts "HEY" But As They Turn Around They Soon See They Have Made A Foolish Mistake As The Group Scream And If One Screams It's Like A Dinner Bell They All Swarm There Prey And Attack With Allmighty Force! Realising How Much Danger There In Jackson Calls A Retreat. They Sprint Away  But While Running Weaver Slips And Falls,Jackson Stops To Help His Friend But Weaver Shouts "Run I'll Hold Them Off" Jackson Replies Sternly "No Were Getting Out Of Here" Jackson Puts Weaver On His Shoulder And Speed Walks Out Of The Cavern Only To See That This Was A Bad Mistake As A Group Of Infected For Guarding The Entrance,Jackson Seeing No Hope Put Down Weaver And Fires Away Luckily The Bullets Mince The Zombies And Jackson And Weaver Just Get Out Alive......   


Chapter 10 The Fortress 

Jackson Manages To Stop The Zombies With A Quick Grenade Down The Cavern entrance To Halt Them For A While. Weaver Struggles To Get Up But With Jacksons Help He Gets Up And Starts Looking Upwards. Weaver Happily Shouts "Look! A Fortress! There Hopefully Will Be Humans There" Jackson Agrees And They Make There Way Up The Path To The Fortress. Jackson Halts Weaver As He Sees Four Red Eyes In The Mist "Shhh Do You See The Eyes?" Weaver Replies "Yeah Shall We Engage?"
Jackson Seeing The Eyes Get Closer Quickly Shouts "SHOOT THEM NOW" Jackson And Weaver Fire Away Until The Eyes Disappear. Quickly Realising He Was On His Last Clip Jackson Switches To His USP.45 Pistol And Presses On Into The Darkness.

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It's back Zombies outbreak is Here!


Chapter 10 The Fortress 

Jackson Manages To Stop The Zombies With A Quick Grenade Down The Cavern entrance To Halt Them For A While. Weaver Struggles To Get Up But With Jacksons Help He Gets Up And Starts Looking Upwards. Weaver Happily Shouts "Look! A Fortress! There Hopefully Will Be Humans There" Jackson Agrees And They Make There Way Up The Path To The Fortress. Jackson Halts Weaver As He Sees Four Red Eyes In The Mist "Shhh Do You See The Eyes?" Weaver Replies "Yeah Shall We Engage?"
Jackson Seeing The Eyes Get Closer Quickly Shouts "SHOOT THEM NOW" Jackson And Weaver Fire Away Until The Eyes Disappear. Quickly Realising He Was On His Last Clip Jackson Switches To His USP.45 Pistol And Presses On Into The Darkness.

Chapter 11  Dammit
                                              As They Reach The End Of The Tunnel,They Know They Have Made A Bad Choice Of Coming To This Fortress As Nearly Every-Single Infected Is Guarding The God Dam Place.
Weaver Says "Jackson What Do We Do?" Jackson Doesn't Reply Weaver Shouts "Jackson!" Jackson Replies "Weaver GetDown!"  As A Garzola *Flying Infected* Swoops Down And Grabs Weaver. Jackson Try's Save Him But His Pistol Is Not Strong Enuf To Pierce The Garzola's Skin But As Weaver Got Pulled Up Into The Air, He Dropped His Rifle. Jackson Picks Up Weavers Rifle And Look's Up Into The Air To Fire But It Had Gone. Jackson Now Alone Realises That Weaver Would Probably Not Survive But Jackson Knows Weavers A Strong Solider And Will Survive Longer In There Than Most Men So Jackson Presses On Engaging The Frontal Guards. He Luckily Won That Battle Without A Scrape But How Will He Face In The Fortress       
 

[thebossmant]

u have inspred me now i will craete my own zombie story

and i promise i wont copy the basic story line maybe i will start in a refugee camp in colorado LOL meh i hope it works


or i will rewrite homefront xD


ill just make a story and ill posgt it here first.

[Mithoz]

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

[thebossmant]

meeeeeeeeeeeeeee


wait for what?

[doom]

Hello Guys Its Doom And Im Bringing ZO Back From The Dead As A Special Cristmas Present! This Has Nothing To Do With The Origanl Storyline!

Chapter Cristmas: Operation SC

There Was A Knock On The Door, Cooper Begged Me Not To Open It But I Had Too, In Case It Was Food. As I Slowly Made My Way Over To The Door I Heard A Slight Giggling Sound Coming From Outside,But Still I Opened the Door. To My Suprise I Found Three Kids Asking Me To Take Them To Santa's Palace (This Was A Shop In Town) I Was Wondering How These Kids Were Still Alive But Nether The Less I Helped Them To The Shop.
This Im Afraid Was A Bad Idea, The Town Was Infested With The Rotten Beast's And Me And Cooper Didn't Want To Continue With The Kids So We Left Them In Our Car. The Only Was Forward Was On Foot, We Took Out Our Weapons And Pushed Into The Darkness. We Fought For Our Lies Trying To Help These Kids But Then The Worse Thing Happened Cooper Got A Bite Wound To The Upper Left Arm. Zombie Bites Had No Cure If You Were Bitten You Had Less Then 3 minutes Left. Cooper Left Me Saving Me And Himself while Trying To Take Out As Many Zombies As Possible. This Left Me With A Dielemma I Got To The Shop And Opened The Door But.......

Hey Guys I Want You! To Finish Off This Paragraph What Does He Meet How Does He Kill/Save It?
Thanks Doom

[slimjimninja]

doom wrote:

Hello Guys Its Doom And Im Bringing ZO Back From The Dead As A Special Cristmas Present! This Has Nothing To Do With The Origanl Storyline!

Chapter Cristmas: Operation SC

There Was A Knock On The Door, Cooper Begged Me Not To Open It But I Had Too, In Case It Was Food. As I Slowly Made My Way Over To The Door I Heard A Slight Giggling Sound Coming From Outside,But Still I Opened the Door. To My Suprise I Found Three Kids Asking Me To Take Them To Santa's Palace (This Was A Shop In Town) I Was Wondering How These Kids Were Still Alive But Nether The Less I Helped Them To The Shop.
This Im Afraid Was A Bad Idea, The Town Was Infested With The Rotten Beast's And Me And Cooper Didn't Want To Continue With The Kids So We Left Them In Our Car. The Only Was Forward Was On Foot, We Took Out Our Weapons And Pushed Into The Darkness. We Fought For Our Lies Trying To Help These Kids But Then The Worse Thing Happened Cooper Got A Bite Wound To The Upper Left Arm. Zombie Bites Had No Cure If You Were Bitten You Had Less Then 3 minutes Left. Cooper Left Me Saving Me And Himself while Trying To Take Out As Many Zombies As Possible. This Left Me With A Dielemma I Got To The Shop And Opened The Door But.......

Hey Guys I Want You! To Finish Off This Paragraph What Does He Meet How Does He Kill/Save It?
Thanks Doom

...the zombie queen was waiting. She was ten feet tall, with six arms that looked like they had mutated into leaches. She instantly assaulted me with these arms, causing me to have to jump out of the way countless times. I need to find a weak spot, I thought, and so began gathering information about the zombie queen. I discovered that her head bobbled up and down, and in between that, revealing her weak neck. I needed a weapon, so I grabbed a shotgun that was lying right by me and shot at her neck many times, blowing it to smithereens. Her head bounced when it hit the floor. Her body keeled over and fell. I was lucky to be alive.

[trineroks]

slimjimninja wrote:

doom wrote:

Hello Guys Its Doom And Im Bringing ZO Back From The Dead As A Special Cristmas Present! This Has Nothing To Do With The Origanl Storyline!

Chapter Cristmas: Operation SC

There Was A Knock On The Door, Cooper Begged Me Not To Open It But I Had Too, In Case It Was Food. As I Slowly Made My Way Over To The Door I Heard A Slight Giggling Sound Coming From Outside,But Still I Opened the Door. To My Suprise I Found Three Kids Asking Me To Take Them To Santa's Palace (This Was A Shop In Town) I Was Wondering How These Kids Were Still Alive But Nether The Less I Helped Them To The Shop.
This Im Afraid Was A Bad Idea, The Town Was Infested With The Rotten Beast's And Me And Cooper Didn't Want To Continue With The Kids So We Left Them In Our Car. The Only Was Forward Was On Foot, We Took Out Our Weapons And Pushed Into The Darkness. We Fought For Our Lies Trying To Help These Kids But Then The Worse Thing Happened Cooper Got A Bite Wound To The Upper Left Arm. Zombie Bites Had No Cure If You Were Bitten You Had Less Then 3 minutes Left. Cooper Left Me Saving Me And Himself while Trying To Take Out As Many Zombies As Possible. This Left Me With A Dielemma I Got To The Shop And Opened The Door But.......

Hey Guys I Want You! To Finish Off This Paragraph What Does He Meet How Does He Kill/Save It?
Thanks Doom

...the zombie queen was waiting. She was ten feet tall, with six arms that looked like they had mutated into leaches. She instantly assaulted me with these arms, causing me to have to jump out of the way countless times. I need to find a weak spot, I thought, and so began gathering information about the zombie queen. I discovered that her head bobbled up and down, and in between that, revealing her weak neck. I needed a weapon, so I grabbed a shotgun that was lying right by me and shot at her neck many times, blowing it to smithereens. Her head bounced when it hit the floor. Her body keeled over and fell. I was lucky to be alive.

I stood there, shotgun in hand, staring at the carcass of the zombie queen. Then all of a sudden out of her neck grew a new head! I realized that her neck was not the weak point. She began to spew avid vomit and I narrowly avoided her by diving past the cash register. I got my shotgun and fired at the queen, but the shotgun shells merely bounced off her tough carapace. So I looked around and saw a FGM-148 Javelin under the cash register. I picked up the Javelin, not thinking twice about how or why that thing was in a store, locked onto the queen, and fired. However, I forgot I was inside a building so the missle instead flew upward and obliterated the ceiling. The debris fell on the queen and she was instantly crushed to death.

[galm]

Reminds me of the walking dead.

[doom]

Haha Thank's Galm Thats A Good TV Program

[doom]

Hey Guys Its Doom
Zombie Outbreak Is Back For Good!
This Will Follow A New Path Of A Normal Civillian Nithing to do with the old storyline.
Also Three Preview Spots Are Up For Grabs! Post For One

Zombie Outbreak: A Different Vision
Chapter 1 At The Break Of Dawn

I Woke Up At The Crack Of Dawn To Find Myself Back In My Own World "This" world. I Slowly Got Out Of Bed dragging Myself Across the safehouse dorms. I Get Dressed Into My Normal Clothes Then Make My Way To The Armoury. Today I Shall Be Hunting With My Mates, my Weapon Of Choice is the Bushmaster ACR. As I Open The Door, The Stench Of Rotting Flesh Stings My Nose. Me And My Group Go Out Into The Vast Openness of this barren world. We hear a slight screaming in the distance then see a group of undead running towards us. This Was Just Fun For Us, we Aim Down Our Rifles Sights And Fire Away Mowing Them Down As They Rush towards us.
As we push forward towards Bristol we meet a group of hungry survivours, We couldent feed them so we shot them on the spot, The Ammo was useful.
We hit the outskirts of bristol Then were in......

Hey Its Doom I Hope You Liked It!

[doom]

Chapter Two: Welcome To Madness.

As We Entered Bristol, And We entered it Very carefully. We Couldent Stand the Smell. The City was Demosished, The Army Must Of Tried to destroy all zombies in the area. But It Didn't Work. Walking around the corner, we saw around 20 Rotters eating a team of what looked like soldiers that didn't get out quick enough. Quickly We darted into a house next to us. My was this a bad idea. There was writing all over the walls " We Took there souls" and "Hey Guys, Im an artist but here's the twist. The Paint is A knife and the Cavas is My wrists". There must of been some sick people here. Then We Heard a Human scream and a woman was running towards us with a Fire Axe, I took the shot and she fell down to the floor, She had red eyes and Pale, Blotchy Slin. This Must Be A new infection. We Turn away only to hear here scream again....

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