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delta1
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Joined: 19 Dec 2009
Posts: 182
Location: New york
 Post Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:44 pm  Post subject: My first...
Can someon check these if it iz tottaly horrible (which it probobly iz going to bE) tell me dso i can make changes :D

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trineroks
Chief Administrator


Joined: 16 Oct 2009
Posts: 1770
Location: Southern Cali (UCLA)
 Post Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:26 pm  
well... since i know it's your first time in mapping, i'll not go harsh on you

delta... your maps need a lot of work :( you got strange triggers, one of your maps has a replicator but no triggers (which means there are no win triggers or a trigger to start up the replicator!) The Find Andy spawnpad mission has no trigger to create an andy once you step on the pad, one mission says that if you and your opponent own 10 hydras, then you win (??) and some missions you start out without even having credits!! overall, you need plenty of trigger work.

All your maps look the same also. put some diversity!!

and finally, the biggest error i found... All your sides are on "computer" which means that there are no human players. And you set max amount of players as 1 on all your maps. But what I'm saying is that you should go through your maps and change "computer" to "human", and give a name to each of your levels (all your levels' names are called Untitled Level"!!

So please, delta, im not trying to be mean, but take off this map pack and fix your maps.

Meanwhile if you are interested on how to make better maps and learn about how triggers function, check out my mappack here. Download it, import my mission pack, and learn.

If you need any additional help I'll be happy to teach you :)
delta1
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Joined: 19 Dec 2009
Posts: 182
Location: New york
 Post Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:01 pm  
thank u soooo much trineroks!! :D and i would be Amazed if a master map maker can teach me thank u thank u !! :D :D :D
galm
ForeRunner


Joined: 18 Oct 2009
Posts: 2382
Location: New York
 Post Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:17 pm  
Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious.
Strobe
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Joined: 16 Apr 2010
Posts: 40
 Post Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:17 am  
I think u guys mean me. to put it simply all starting map makers must read all the guide, once uv done that then ask about stuff u dont understand.
hers da link: http://sites.warfareincorporated.com/mission-authoring/triggers
trineroks
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Joined: 16 Oct 2009
Posts: 1770
Location: Southern Cali (UCLA)
 Post Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:01 am  
galm wrote:
Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious.


lol xD i think im as good or better than you ;)

been making maps since the dawn of starcraft
delta1
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Joined: 19 Dec 2009
Posts: 182
Location: New york
 Post Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:14 pm  
ok so can either galm or trineroks help me :wink: beacsue i got no clue :lol: wat to do so i would be pleased :D if 1 of u could teach me :D
trineroks
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Joined: 16 Oct 2009
Posts: 1770
Location: Southern Cali (UCLA)
 Post Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:15 pm  
well... what EXACTLY do you need help with? everything? lol

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